I wish there where

more books about SONAR

FACT'S... Specifically about whales!

You could turn this into a boy who loves whales! Just like you.-Ms. Schwieters

my character name is Michael. he sees this orca/killer whale lost his [pod]

other wise kown as a whale grope. Michael is 17 yaers old.

Fabulous start! Where was he? -Ms. Schwieters

he is in California his dad is a 2 year business trip his mom died when he was 6 years old. his dad is in Australia. His dad is a marine biologist

Keep going! Why does he love whales? How does he feel about his dad being gone? Does he have a good relationship with his dad?-Ms. Schwieters

Michael as loved whales ever sense his dad took him on a whale watch his favorite whale is a orca

Keep it up! I am proud of t hard work I can tell you are doing! Push yourself to get more ideas down.-Ms. Schwieters

External internal

-he hates school.

-has one friend.

-He is as wight skin. -has a girlfriend.

-ice blue eyes.

-blond hair.

Don't foget your internal charateristics. Keep up the great work!
I am proud of you.-Ms. Schwieters