May 7th, 2010 I JUST LOST ALL OF MY NOTES THAT WERE ON THIS PAGE!!!!!!!!! I AM VERY MAD!!!!!!
My idea that im going to write about:
That is very frustrating. Don't let it get to you. .-Ms. Schwieters
May 10th 2010
My Story idea:
Fleeing the country with Sydney:
On Saturday Me and Sydney Fled the Country.
Hold on! You are telling the story. What about the character development? You need to tell me who your character really is before you can start in on the story.-Ms.Schwieters
May 11th 2010
Cindy's Outside features:
-Med Light Blonde
-Short
-Mexican,Indian and Canadian
-Darker skin
-Green and Pink finger nails
-Small body
-4ft 7in
-Dark blonde highlights
-Orange Toe nails
-Green eyes
Inside features
-Scared of thunderstorms
-Loves scrapbooking
-Loves SWIMMING!!!
-Loves hunting, But doesnt enjoy gun talk that much though!
-Fearless
-Caring
-Loves Mr.Teddy
-Loves Mr.Teddy
-Is Sad when she lost M.Teddy
-Glad someone else more deserving got Mr.teddy
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This is a good start. I am concerned that you don't have more. I know you have more in you.-Ms. Schwieters
It's hard...... But I'm thinking!
Lindsey's Character Traits
Outside
-Long dark hair
-5ft 3in
-Light brown eyes
-Light skin
-Mothers face (as some people say)
-Short
-Pink Finger nails
-Light green toe nails
-
Inside
-Energetic
-Loves swimming
-Likes reading
-Dislikes math
-Creative
-Sad that shes poor
-ALWAYS has a positive additude
-Sad that her mother died
-<3 her dad
-Doesnt Like living in Canada, but has to.
-Sad because she hardly ever see's her dad, because he has 2 work.
-Is glad that she has a friend now.
DRAFT
Hi my name is Cindy, and this story is about the time I met Mr.Teddy.
It all began 3 years ago, in July.
I was five at the time, and my mother, Clementine, had just bought me a new stuffed animal, Mr.Teddy.
I loved him VERY much!!!!!!!!
My idea that im going to write about:
That is very frustrating. Don't let it get to you. .-Ms. Schwieters
May 10th 2010
My Story idea:
Fleeing the country with Sydney:
On Saturday Me and Sydney Fled the Country.
Hold on! You are telling the story. What about the character development? You need to tell me who your character really is before you can start in on the story.-Ms.Schwieters
May 11th 2010
Cindy's Outside features:
-Med Light Blonde
-Short
-Mexican,Indian and Canadian
-Darker skin
-Green and Pink finger nails
-Small body
-4ft 7in
-Dark blonde highlights
-Orange Toe nails
-Green eyes
Inside features
-Scared of thunderstorms
-Loves scrapbooking
-Loves SWIMMING!!!
-Loves hunting, But doesnt enjoy gun talk that much though!
-Fearless
-Caring
-Loves Mr.Teddy
-Loves Mr.Teddy
-Is Sad when she lost M.Teddy
-Glad someone else more deserving got Mr.teddy
-
This is a good start. I am concerned that you don't have more. I know you have more in you.-Ms. Schwieters
It's hard...... But I'm thinking!
Lindsey's Character Traits
Outside
-Long dark hair
-5ft 3in
-Light brown eyes
-Light skin
-Mothers face (as some people say)
-Short
-Pink Finger nails
-Light green toe nails
-
Inside
-Energetic
-Loves swimming
-Likes reading
-Dislikes math
-Creative
-Sad that shes poor
-ALWAYS has a positive additude
-Sad that her mother died
-<3 her dad
-Doesnt Like living in Canada, but has to.
-Sad because she hardly ever see's her dad, because he has 2 work.
-Is glad that she has a friend now.
DRAFT
Hi my name is Cindy, and this story is about the time I met Mr.Teddy.
It all began 3 years ago, in July.
I was five at the time, and my mother, Clementine, had just bought me a new stuffed animal, Mr.Teddy.
I loved him VERY much!!!!!!!!