-M.O.A, i was lost and I went to the chocolate store.
-Campfire , very buggy had huge marshmellows.
-campfire, Lauren .T burned Charlies back , Charlies back was on fire.
I am glad that you have stuck with things that have happened to you. That will make it easier to focus on what you know. Ms. Schwieters
5-5-10
I wish their were more stories about:
- Girls who like to do more camping.
- Traveling
- Girls who have a twin brother
- Annoying brothers
Keep up the gread ideas! Ms. Schwieters
Issues:
5-6-10
-A girl who's brother likes to pick on her
-Not having any friends
-Being bullied
-Look weird
-Friend issues
-Parents devorced
A great list of things kids go through. Which one will you pick?-Ms. Schwieters
My story is is going to be about to kids named Rabecca and Carlos ,they are twins Rabecca is older by 1 minute she loves to mess around with Carlos. Carlos is pretty sensetive ,he likes to be active.
and... Try to list what your character likes, feels, thinks -Ms. Schwieters
-I wasnt done yet.
Try and get more done every day. You need to push yourself.-Ms. Schwieters
Exturnal InturalInturnal
brown hair bossy(to brother) Cares for her friends
blue eyes caring
long hair
light skin
short
likes neon stuff
Remember th lesson was to make a list of the internal and external characteristics separately. - Ms. Schwieters
- I corrected your spelling.:) 5-14-10
Rabecca:
-she wants to go camping
gets in the way:
her parents are too busy with their work (her dad is a banker and her mom is an hairstylist)
She yearns for traveling around the world ,her parents never let them do anything "dangerous".
-camping, fell down it hurt!
-sleepover ,water balloon fight.
-M.O.A, i was lost and I went to the chocolate store.
-Campfire , very buggy had huge marshmellows.
-campfire, Lauren .T burned Charlies back , Charlies back was on fire.
I am glad that you have stuck with things that have happened to you. That will make it easier to focus on what you know. Ms. Schwieters
5-5-10
I wish their were more stories about:
- Girls who like to do more camping.
- Traveling
- Girls who have a twin brother
- Annoying brothers
Keep up the gread ideas! Ms. Schwieters
Issues:
5-6-10
-A girl who's brother likes to pick on her
-Not having any friends
-Being bullied
-Look weird
-Friend issues
-Parents devorced
A great list of things kids go through. Which one will you pick?-Ms. Schwieters
My story is is going to be about to kids named Rabecca and Carlos ,they are twins Rabecca is older by 1 minute she loves to mess around with Carlos. Carlos is pretty sensetive ,he likes to be active.
and... Try to list what your character likes, feels, thinks -Ms. Schwieters
-I wasnt done yet.
Try and get more done every day. You need to push yourself.-Ms. Schwieters
Exturnal Intural Inturnal
brown hair bossy(to brother) Cares for her friends
blue eyes caring
long hair
light skin
short
likes neon stuff
Remember th lesson was to make a list of the internal and external characteristics separately. - Ms. Schwieters
- I corrected your spelling.:)
5-14-10
Rabecca:
-she wants to go camping
gets in the way:
her parents are too busy with their work (her dad is a banker and her mom is an hairstylist)
She yearns for traveling around the world ,her parents never let them do anything "dangerous".