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may 4th 2010 realistic fiction ideas

1st.hi jack on a pla ne. 2nd.swimming and attacked by a shark. 3r d.sky diving and go off target and have to live is the wildern ess and survive. 4th.a fisherman falls through the ice while ice fishing in russia. 5th.a special forces unit is ta king a submarine into china and is hit by a torpedo. 6th.a group of m arine rangers head into i ran only to find th emselves of f target and lost in enemy ground.

Wow, you h ave a ton of ideas! Remember what we talked about and bein g positive.- Ms. Schwieters

may 5th 2010 i wish there were m ore book s about real things like a lex rider series by anthony horowitz  like realistic action books a bout like kids who surv ive in wilderness I know that Alex Rider stories deal with some pretty big ideas. Perhaps you can twist it into some adventures that your age group can really experience.- Ms. Schwieters

may 6th 2010 looks. my character is a boy who struggles with 1.stage fright 2.another kid in class who is a show off in soccer 3.anger management

This characters sounds like he needs some help in life. I am excited to see how you write him some happiness.-Ms. schweiters

5-7-10

1.trouble follows kid around every where he goes. 2.always gets caught up in other peoples fights. (good thing.)3.is a boy. 4.anger issues.

5-7-10 2nd time today.

my character is a boy who has a mom and dad. he has 4 friends Ike,Matt,Lance and Brandt.

Great start. Keep it up. Why does he get caught up in other people's fights? Why does he have anger issues?-Ms. Schwieters

5-9-10 i just thought he should and i read a good book about a kid with it.

my story is about a 10 year old kid who is on a plane that gets hijacked and he has to escape. my characters name is eric his last name is stone and the table below shows his family tree. he has anger management and he has to find out how to control it, but he thinks to himself no get mad because then you get hyper and can take them down. then he thinks no don't get mad because anger makes panic, panic makes mistakes and mistakes are what get you killed. and the thing i want to do most is to live.

family ||  || williams family ||  || grey family ||  || blain family ||  ||   ||   ||   ||   || mike ||  || father dave ||  || father ian ||  || father jonas ||  ||   ||   || morgan ||  || mother sarah ||  || mother anna ||  || mother molly ||  ||   ||   || eric ||  || kids tony jack ||  || kids megan derek john ||  || kid betsy ||  ||   ||   || the rider family is on there way to flordia from minnesota with the williams family. it just so happens that the plane they take to flordia might be the last plane they ever take.
 * stone
 * father
 * mother
 * kid

Great job figuring out the table! You might need to find a new name for your main character. Perhaps instead of hijacking the plane has engine trouble.-Ms. Schwieters

5-10-10 the reason i did hijacking is because then i will say eric had a marshmallow gun and he wont have it put together so it will look like toy play tubes and since its plastic he can take it on the plane. then he assembles it and loads his snack for the plane witch was marshmallows and shoots them at the hijackers as a distraction then he can escape. and engine trouble on a plane means there wont be as much action there will still be some but not enough for my story. my character was born 7-26-1996 he is 14 years old and is very smart. people in chart below are the people on the plane. family || williams family ||  ||   || dave ||  ||   || morgan || mother sara ||  ||   || eric || kids tony jack ||  ||   ||
 * stone
 * father mike || father
 * mother
 * kid

I appreciate the marshmallow idea, but it doesn't feel realistic. It seems like an easy way to get a hijacker into your story. I know there are a ton of other things that can happen. Don't get into the story. Tell me MORE about your characters. Their hopes/dreams and things like that. You are getting too much into the story.-Ms. Schwieter

5-11-10

Inside Outside

1. Very aggressive 1.short brown hair 2. Sharp shooter 2.4 feet 11 inches 3.strong 3.skinny 4.afraid of heights 4.boy scout 5.Caucasian 5.on a wrestling team

Keep going. There is much more under the skin of your character. What do you like about your character?-Ms. Schwieters

5-14-10

he wants a new marshmallow gun. he yearns for good guns at lower prices. whats in the way is the fact that he doesn't have enough money.

my character wheres camouflage clothes and black glasses. his favorite way to kill time is to use his marshmallow gun. his favorite place is germany. his favorite color is ' 'BLOOD RED.''

 5-24-10 beggining. sounds:quiet,harsh,serious. feels:mad,destructive,cautious,smart. looks:pale,still,smart,prepared,vicious.

looks:nervous,scared. feels:disoriented,smart. sounds:tough,loud.

looks:battle hardened. feels:strategic,tired,limp. sounds:tired,weak,disabled.