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5 - 4 - 10

I went to the mall over break with my family. There were a lot of new rides. I think that if if they are going to keep adding rides they are going to have to make the park bigger. Why I think this is because they want to make it better and still add keep old rides and add new ones. I like all the rides they are cool but they don't need to add more. We have a lot so lets just appreciate what we have. If they add more they will have to start taking over stores so lets just keep what we have and live with it.

Since I used to work there, I have a hard time imagining new rides being added! How are you going to turn this into a fiction story? -Ms. Schwieters

I could by g reedy people trying to make it the best but other people argue against this. Might turn out bad... very bad...

I wish there were more books about:

action horror

adventure

camping

books with a lot of action

rich become poor for a day and poor become rich

I wonder how your last idea would turn out? Would it hange peole's minds about different beliefs? -Ms. Schwieters

5-6-10

1. stage freight Characters: Adam Parker

2. Expand on this... why are they afraid to be on stage? What do they need to be on stage for? SO many questions.-Ms. Schwieters they all have to present a speech on stage.

5-7-10

Spooky woods This is great! It sounds like a movie trailer script or a great back of the book summary to get someone to read this story! Keep going!!-Ms. Schwieters
 * 7 people
 * 5 paths
 * 3 haunted places
 * and only 1 way out

shyer active but sensitive to cuts takes risks likes to bike ride does sports plays a lot very active controlling does not have many friends good personality taller always where's jean's (sometimes wheres shorts)
 * __Internal__**:
 * __External__**: blue eyes

Love that your list of internal characteristics is longer than your external! Can't wait to see what happens.-Ms. Schwieters

My character wants a trick bike or a soccer net (his brother gets all the cool stuff)

He yearns for a skateboard park or soccer field

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT

Shy because he doesn't have friends because he's shy loves sports cooperative active interested in mathematics age 10