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 * Realistic Fiction ideas:** 5-4-10

-camping, fell down it hurt!

-sleepover ,water balloon fight.

-M.O.A, i was lost and I went to the chocolate store.

-Campfire, very buggy had huge marshmellows.

-campfire, Lauren .T burned Charlies back, Charlies back was on fire.

I am glad that you have stuck with things that have happened to you. That will make it easier to focus on what you know. Ms. Schwieters

5-5-10

I wish their were more stories about:

- Girls who like to do more camping.

- Traveling

- Girls who have a twin brother

- Annoying brothers

Keep up the gread ideas! Ms. Schwieters

Issues:

5-6-10

-A girl who's brother likes to pick on her

-Not having any friends

-Being bullied

-Look weird

-Friend issues

-Parents devorced

A great list of things kids go through. Which one will you pick?-Ms. Schwieters

My story is is going to be about to kids named Rabecca and Carlos ,they are twins Rabecca is older by 1 minute she loves to mess around with Carlos. Carlos is pretty sensetive ,he likes to be active.

and... Try to list what your character likes, feels, thinks -Ms. Schwieters

-I wasnt done yet.

Try and get more done every day. You need to push yourself.-Ms. Schwieters

__**Exturnal Intural**__   __**Inturnal**__ brown hair bossy(to brother) Cares for her friends blue eyes caring long hair light skin short likes neon stuff

Remember th lesson was to make a list of the internal and external characteristics separately. - Ms. Schwieters - I corrected your spelling.:) Rabecca:__**
 * __5-14-10

-she **wants** to go camping

her parents are too busy with their work (her dad is a banker and her mom is an hairstylist)
 * __gets in the way:__**

She **yearns for** traveling around the world ,her parents never let them do anything "dangerous".