bubblebug

5/4/10

FICTIONA CAT GOT LOST WITH A KEY TO SAVE THE WORLD .! THE HAMSTER BITE!. THE POLE THAT MOVED!.THE SUN WENT KABOM!.THE FIELDS OF CORN!.MAGNET!. Make sure your story ideas are realistic. Check your spelling. When the red line is under the word, you need to check your spelling.- Ms. Schwieters

I WISH THAR WERE MORE STORIES ABOUT ... .GIRLS THAT want to live on farms .

5/6/10 ISSUES . bullies !!!!! . differences ! . popularty ! . how you look ! . how you dress ! .bus!! . These are big issues! You can write a story about a girl who rises above these issues. -Ms. Schwieters 5/7/10 A girl who lives on a farm gets bullied at school, is a no one. Her mom and dad died wen she was five. Shes lived on her own for five years and is struggling with​ her farm and keeping her farm going. CHARACTER tRATES name:champ(Girl) age:10 family:Mom died from a car crash Dad died not but a couple days later from guilt that his wife died.(she had no other family to take care of champ) Gets bullied alot. scared of :cars and guilt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.

charickter traits name :John (boy) family :nothing exeped champ

Tell me more. Also, check your spelling!-Ms. Schwieters

PLEAS COMET BELOW.

Great start with your character developing. I know you are getting your ideas down, but you need to pay attention to your spelling. You know how to spell and you need to remember that when you are writing.-Ms. Schwieters

5/11/10
 * long orange/red hair down to butt.
 * freckles on face.
 * tall and skinny.
 * weirs farm clothes.
 * weirs confers.
 * one pair of shoes.
 * blue eyes.
 * 10 years old.

5/11/10
 * emotional when someone saids family.
 * scared.
 * feels alone alot.

5/19/10
 * feels like a no one.
 * likes to sing to herself when she feels alone.
 * loves to dance.
 * loves to sing.
 * apreheats her differences.
 * docent care what other people think about her .5/18/10
 * lets stuff off her back not including her parents.

5/14/10
 * very emotional
 * docent want

WANT more farm animals

YEARNS FOR her mother and father to come back to her

WHAT IS IN THE WAY her parents are dead and she dose not have enough monny for them