harlie419

=5-4-10=

off the eiffel tower. She did it very good so she and she liked ti so she did it agen climed up all the stares agenand did it agen. After that she had to go get o hot dog but insted she got a pizza she loves pizza. so for the next cupel of days she got pizza when she came back she was so exsited because she got a call from the people how write the world recerd book and she is in the world recerd book for the bigst and longestbungey jump.**
 * My grandpa went to pares france, and she loved to bungey jump, so she jumped

5-5-10 people how dance so much that they miss there life like your b-day.

people how have bisnes trips and miss there kids b-days

kids how have to servie on there owne.

kids how hate to read then they learn to and they love it.

have a dream and do it.

5-6-10 being bulead.

not having friends.

looking weard.

flunking school.

picked on by family.

parents devorest.

5-7-10

every one needs a friend.

kids how have to take care for them selves.

a girl how wants to travel but her parents don't like to so she is not aloud to so when her best friend asks her to go to florda dose she say yes dose she get in truble?

Wow, great story idea! If you stick with this, make sure you tell about all the feelings and inner story thoughts.-Ms. Schwieters-- Huge list! These all have great potential!! Your travel idea is interesting... hmmm what would happen?

5-11-10

outside


 * 1) Brown hair
 * 2) Light skin
 * 3) Tall
 * 4) Freckles
 * 5) Always smilling
 * 6) Always happy
 * 7) Chear full

Inside
 * 1) Cold
 * 2) Scared of thunderstorms
 * 3) Gets nerves
 * 4) scared to stand up for herself
 * 5) Gets nerves

You have a great start. You have given your character weaknesses. What about their strengths? What is positive about your character?-Ms. Schwieters

5-14-10

To go to Florida because she lives in Minnesota were it is cold and her friends tell her how worm it is there. To travel because all her friends travel and tell her how amazing it is.and that she wants to have the experience of being on a plane. Her parents don't like to travel. Because when the go on planes they always get sick. And her parents are to busy with there work.