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​4/22/10 I thought that it was so sad that that many kids and princables have died because of bullying. Now I want to stand up for every kid I see getting bulled. -checkUlater I am glad to hear that. It doesn't surprise me. You are very conscious about what other kids are going through. That is one of your strengths! thanks! -checkUlater5/4/10 **realistic fiction ideas I am thinking about a girl that gets a job at a dog grooming store. I got this idea just from my next door neighbor owns a dog grooming store plus she has a lot of dogs of her own.** Keep thinking! This would be a good idea since you can get info from your neighbor. Ms Schwieters //thank you// kids who were adopted 5/6/10 There was a nine year old girl her name was Raina. She has sister adopted from china at first she was ok with it. But then things went bad.When her parents came home from china it was nothing that she expected. Her new sister Sonia had a big temper. Raina was picked up from school early. And she had to be quiet because her new sister was asleep she did not get why she could not wake her up not yet at least.Buit when Sonia woke up she new the truth and on top of all of tat her parents had food poisining!!!!!!!!!!!!! so diffrent members of her family kept coming over to watch her. ** **all about Raina** Raina is a 9 year old girl who is having truble handaling her sisters tantrums she's already having friend truble at school all about Rob (they're dad) rob is in a trucking buiness he does the paper work and stuff but the catch is that it is at night all night so he sleeps a lot in the day all about Diann Great start! What went badly? Why does Sonia have a big temper?-Ms. Schwieters Great job with your developing the characters Keep going. There are so many possibilities. -Ms.Schwieters Sounds like she has a lot going on. What are the good things? Check your spelling.-Ms. Schwieters __**inside traits**__ __**outside traits**__ Some of these are internal traits. Remember what Mrs. Comisar said about characters being too good to be true. What are her weaknesses?-Ms. Schwieters
 * I wish that there were books about.......
 * has trouble with her sister
 * gets bullied a lot
 * likes shoes
 * loves to camp
 * is on the girls basket ball team
 * loves to swim
 * loves to fish
 * is in choir
 * loves to make peace around the world